Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The pollution of water such as lakes, damps, oceans has become a serious problem for environment activists deal with. In this essay, I will examine the cause as well as effects of water pollution for human and animals.
To begin with, human activities are the major reason of water pollution. Today’s scientific development often let human to experiment with harmful chemical substances which can damage the evinronment very badly. After doing several experiment with these substances in a laboratory, researcher tend to bring these pollutant materials to water resources like rivers, lakes or even oceans as they were functioned as a bin. As a result, water resources become deteriorate by poisioness materials. Thus, the more dangerous materials are throwed to water resources, the worse they will be.
There are several impacts that will possibly occur as result of water pollution to the earth’s inhabitants including animals and human. First and foremost, this devastating situation can cause water scarcity, and leads to extreme drought which is a lose-lose situation for human and animals. Furthermore, the contaminated water could kill living things in ocean and river, then, the lost of ocean creatures will reduce the availability of food resources for human and will eventually cause a huge starvation around the world.
To sum up, I firmly believe that human bad attitudes towards the environment are the main concern of resulting water pollution, hence, impacts such as water scare, reduction in our livestock and huge lost of ocean animals seem inescapable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7953496344 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0639430938 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26381184536 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110763381814 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743012288057 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17257953204 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759330753777 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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