Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The popular events like football, cricket hockey and other sports are very important to reduce the international conflicts and tensions. At the same time, these games can be very helpful to release patriotic emotions of country men in best and safe way. I think sports teach people to have great wisdom and sportsman spirit. These unique features of sports help people across the different countries to come together.
There are several countries in the world exist which have wide number of tensions between them. In the 21st century, it is not practical to have war because of conflicts or tension, as it can cause great destruction to everyone. Sportsman holds one of my most favorite qualities and that is sportsman spirit. There is always a winning or losing team in sports but most important thing they do after the game is they congratulate each other with utmost respect. This helps people to accept the decisions and learn how we can stay together even after defeat and let everyone stay happy. For example, my country India and Pakistan have various numbers of issues on different subjects but both the countries play cricket together in which sometime we win or lose. This teaches and helps us to find solutions and come together and discuss problems.
Moreover, these sporting events help people from the various countries to come together at one single place. People of hosting nation can show their hospitality and other can see and understand the culture of their nation. This also helps the political leader to come together on single platform and have relaxed moments while enjoying the game. For Example, in cricket or football world cup, countries play one on one match with each other with their utmost dedication to defeat their opponent in decent and dignified manner. This can be very helpful to keep peace between countries of war and conflicts.
On the other hand, Sometime sports person or Athlete lose their composure or temperament and fight on the field. Due to this kind of scenario, fans and supporters also have fights outside the stadium. To prevent this kind of incident, sports person have to make sure that they will respect every other player.
On a concluding note, as a strong supporter of these games, I strongly believe that these kind of events should be organized in order to keep peace between countries. By this supporters cam also release their feeling of joy and proud in safe way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...of these games, I strongly believe that these kind of events should be organized in order ...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'supporters'' or 'supporter's'?
Suggestion: supporters'; supporter's
...o keep peace between countries. By this supporters cam also release their feeling of joy a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272522522523 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.13963963964 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923423423423 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0427927927928 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0427927927928 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117117117117 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0135135135135 0.0403226058552 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.40832509105 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036036036036 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0810810810811 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018018018018 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00675675675676 0.011925033212 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2438.0 1933.35771543 126% => OK
No of words: 410.0 316.048096192 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94634146341 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363414634146 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260975609756 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173170731707 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109756097561 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40832509105 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.56093040696 90% => OK
Word variations: 56.289503002 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5238095238 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7258666114 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.095238095 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.6213704994 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.79 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341563697671 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.076667487233 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0400450345623 0.0668466124924 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49175170352 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0978804054757 0.148594505496 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123302142622 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685582761242 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341836053157 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0948862996092 0.0638462369009 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216333070892 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614615986264 0.058150111329 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.68436873747 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 5.90881763527 288% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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