Worldwide sports event is the occasions when each nations in the world overlooks their differences in politics, economy or religion with the rest countries on the globe and participate in the games together. I totally agree with the idea that internationals Sporting occasions are necessary in maintaining the worldwide relations and releasing patriotic emotions.
Firstly, these events play an important role in easing international tensions. Atheletes from all over the world can take part in the games and compete in a sportive way. Moreover, countries with high political tension have a chance to shake hands, compete together Therefore, they can understand others better and have the feeling of affection toward their opponent.
Secondly, these sporting occasions give us the opportunities to show patriotism, not only the athletes who directly participate in the sporting races but also all of a nation's resident, Athletes are choosen to join in the events, they represent their own country's strength so they can show their patriotic emotions by giving their best efforts in the games to win the prizes. On the other hand, their audience generate their enthusiasm and excitement during
the game to cheer for the athletes is also a way to releasing nationalism.
To sum up, I believe that international Sporting events is really important in easing tensions among nations, and showing patriotism. But we also must know how to generate nationalism in the right way and manage our temperament and emotions
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Worldwide sports event is the occasions when each nation...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sportive way" with adverb for "sportive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can take part in the games and compete in a sportive way. Moreover, countries with high politica...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us the opportunities to show patriotism, not only the athletes who directly part...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ism, not only the athletes who directly participate in the sporting races but al...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the athletes is also a way to releasing nationalism. To sum up, I believe that ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35983263598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94620096706 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7430845212 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243941117976 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106924950133 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599428400651 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132578988518 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545046980905 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Worldwide sports event is the occasions when each nation...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sportive way" with adverb for "sportive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can take part in the games and compete in a sportive way. Moreover, countries with high politica...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us the opportunities to show patriotism, not only the athletes who directly part...
^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ism, not only the athletes who directly participate in the sporting races but al...
^^
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the athletes is also a way to releasing nationalism. To sum up, I believe that ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35983263598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94620096706 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7430845212 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243941117976 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106924950133 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599428400651 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132578988518 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545046980905 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.