Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
It is true that people's hobbies and interests change in accordance with the latest trends and fashions. They are following these hobbies and interest for the sake of popularity, not for personal pleasure. To a certain extent, I would agree with the statements, but there are some new hobbies which people follow due they like the activity.
On the one hand, many people change their hobbies for popularity purpose. People follow and do popular activities to show that they exist and up to date with the latest trends. But In the reality, they do not have the passion in doing it. For example, mountain biking has become a popular activity in Indonesia lately, and many people are following it. While some of them do mountain biking due to they like the sport, others are doing it to show that they are following the current trend and to show that they have the latest model of the bicycle.
On the other hand, there are other people who change their interests and hobbies due to they like these new activities. These new hobbies might be the latest trend, but these people change their interest because they have such huge passion in these activities. Besides that, these hobbies might be newly invented, therefore no one was doing these hobbies in the past.
In conclusion, it is a fact that people's hobbies and interest sometimes changes. To a certain point, I agree that some people change their hobbies due to following the trend, but there are others who change their interest due to they like the new activity. I personally believe that hobby is a personal matter, and we should not follow what is popular in public, and should do things that we really like.
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211180124224 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.158385093168 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900621118012 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310559006211 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0807453416149 0.0437548338989 185% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.027950310559 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29728105936 2.80594681477 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310559006211 0.0326793684256 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105590062112 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155279503106 0.021408717616 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1670.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73883161512 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340206185567 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223367697595 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127147766323 0.203846283523 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0790378006873 0.137316102897 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29728105936 2.80594681477 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.037074148 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395189003436 0.56093040696 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.4342579393 60.7387585426 62% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7857142857 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3031454195 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 43.1224840452 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.28735632184 1.69124875643 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277322287255 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144409749608 0.102741220458 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0953039543388 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573122774076 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12331390155 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135956052278 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679131092388 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390035591649 0.324371583561 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109383797417 0.0638462369009 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2105188452 0.228012699653 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043507461858 0.058150111329 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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