At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The rise in population rate is becoming increasingly popular in recent years. It is often argued that in this modern era the rate of younger groups is comparatively larger than the older groups. However, the merits of having a high young adult population surpass the older one. This essay will analyse how the former group outweighs the latter one with proper conclusion.
To commence with, the younger generation is the central pillar for any nation's economy. Having said that, a large proportion of youth who are dynamic and energetic will soar the production rate in the country and also equally the income. In other words, the adolescent’s can work longer hours effectively while elderly aged groups will get exhausted within a short amount of time. To illustrate, the recent reports from most of the developing countries like India and China, stated that the percentage of young people are exceeding old and aged individuals, and it enhanced the nation's gross productivity across the globe.
Furthermore, the upsurging rate of youngsters in the nation turn to an innovative and smart nation. Moreover, the adolescent cognitive and creative abilities undoubtedly benefit the developing nation in order to make progress. Thereby, these are treated as pride as new solutions are invented and shared to the higher authorities which ultimately help to create new solutions. For example, the United States being the most developed nation, provides funds for promoting quality education for grooming their kids for encouraging the rising talent.
Despite these advantages, there are two central drawbacks for the decline rate in the elderly population. Firstly, the rise in crime cases due to unethical behavior of young aged people. Secondly, soaring stress levels because of paramount responsibilities at a very young age. To exemplify, one of the developed nations like Japan, known for its technology presence in everyday activities, lacks the elder communities that acts as a guidance for their children, noting high crime every year.
To recapitulate, although a high share of young adults have certain demerits such as lack of ethics and heavy burden of responsibilities, I believe that the magnificent percent of blooming individuals assure enormous benefits rather than elderly aged people who contribute less to the society's growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42119565217 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85727848614 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7268791732 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125505660624 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411562299989 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412884088123 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711412389033 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594553010455 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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