At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the young number of individuals increased in many countries that makes significant population ratio of youth however with this increase the number of experience people decreased, only smaller proportion of aged people in those countries. In the course of the essay, I will discuss the positives and the drawbacks of this difference of people's age.
Firstly, youth makes makes major contribution in their countries growth because young people are more energetic and productive. These young people do jobs in factories and the investors also attract to this country to develop their factories. However, the investors do not prefer to that region where the older people are much higher than their young population. Due to majority of young people, that country have less health issues because youth have much more resistance against diseases and the government allocate less budget to health sector and able consume on other projects. For example, these days china has young population which makes china more productive in comparison of other countries and the disease rate is much lower than others.
While, the less number of senior citizen has some issues to that country because youth do not have much experience of life and the senior people have much experience. Due to this the youth face many problems first time in their lives and not able to solve rightly while they are under supervision of experienced person than they do not make many efforts to solve it.
In conclusion, I believe that both have their own benefits to society however the ratio of young population in a country has more positive points than the aged people in region.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: makes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11029411765 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50185917029 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496323529412 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9795509093 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240659709558 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106388365603 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574465355586 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153029973273 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483665304619 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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