At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The balance between old and young generation comprising a nation's population has always been a contentious issue for many people, and some of them claim that the younger generation has accounted for more population compared to older generation in some parts of the world. Although, there are a number of drawbacks associated with this trend, I believe the benefits accuring are more.
Turning to downsides of this trend, it is an undeniable fact that there is a heavy competition on job and education opportunities around the world, and due to fact that the number of vacancies are limited, hence, high effort and time are what are needed for individuals to got admitted in an interview or enterance exam. Consequently, people will go through difficulties and challenges in order to make their ends meet, and foster their life,. Furthermore, not all human's need can be provided by individual themselves, there are some needs of human being such as job security or accessible healthcare that should be provided by the governments. Since, these factors contribute to anxiety or disease, if they fail in this case, their nations will probably struggle with a variety of problems on mental and physical wellbeing.
On the other hand, having young residents will bring numerous benefits for the authorithies. Firstly, as it is apparent, young people are more keen to acquire knowledge about education, language or IT, skills that can enhance the ranking of any society. As a result, the more young residents comprising the population, the more specialists they can have which can really make a difference in a society's economy. Secondly, it has been proved in many psychological studies that countries with younger population have a lively spirit which leads to less mental problems. Take developed and developing countries as an example, the rate of available job positions, wage and the quality of life is relatively higher in developed countries. In contrast, the proportion of mental and physical problems like heart stroke, blood pressure or anxiety is significantly higher in developing countries.
In conclusion, having young citizens has always been a great advantage for many countries all around the globe. However, there are some drawbacks of this trend, yet I believe since young generation is not only the backbone of the workforce of a country, but also they are its soul, so the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Elahe Rasooli- AC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2253164557 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91374258472 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3652060483 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201482316376 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572421666461 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433727216588 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123430032824 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429277816253 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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