Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Sports have always been part of national identity and moments which put together more countries in a competition have had an enormous influence on people’s relations. I disagree the idea that such events can reduce global tension and I strongly believe that these are a good occasion for most of the inhabitants of a country to be and feel unified.
International sport competitions are a good opportunity for some countries to become popular and to make those who live there to feel proud and happy. This is not available in competitions such as football World Cup. Usually, some of the supporters, if their favorite team had lost an important game, use to express their dissatisfaction by attacking the sustainers of the other team. Consequently, this attitude sometimes can take to an increased tension between galleries, but countries are not so much affected.
However, although few sports competitions can end up with violence, there are still a lot of peaceful sports, which involve expressing negative feelings. Take, for example, gymnastics or tennis. Here, can’t be told that people will cooperate with those which form the gallery of the opposite country but, at least, negative feedback is not gave. Moreover, people are interested only in the success of their team.
In conclusion, supporting a country in an international sporting competition combines the desire of succeed of a nation, but not the wishes of everyone. As a result, this is a good opportunity to unify a country but not some different ones. Sometimes the consequences of a failure can have a temporary negative impact on people’s actions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232026143791 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.143790849673 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104575163399 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0588235294118 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.016339869281 0.0437548338989 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0294117647059 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06657973511 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228758169935 0.0326793684256 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00326797385621 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.117647058824 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196078431373 0.021408717616 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.011925033212 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1645.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23106060606 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382575757576 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329545454545 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253787878788 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162878787879 0.137316102897 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06657973511 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.8443873226 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3076923077 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2324698791 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 53.2622377622 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.70149253731 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298002864745 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0733941654335 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0792476953296 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494727004923 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145732767257 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108353632455 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643317769207 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250338615967 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0385062184921 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193770883556 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426544929227 0.058150111329 73% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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