“Prevention is better than cure”. Out of country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health, education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some experts are in favour that more money should be transferred from the government funding in treatment to education and preventative measures. I totally agree to the suggested policy by the experts.
In this age of microchips and high technology, many people are turning their back on modern pills and other conventional medicine. This is due to the realization taking pills or tablet will lead to minor side effects and often time patient become dependent on it. For example, most of the people take paracetamol or often known as panadol when they have a headache. According to the research, it can cause stomach ulcers over time. Thus instead of pouring money into some pharmaceutical company to produce all these medicines, health budget should be granted to educating the people how to tackle illnesses with a holistic approach.
Despite the breakthrough in the modern medicine and technology, there are still some diseases are incurable, for instance, AIDS and cancer. Treatment can be done, however, the truth is they are indestructible. People would spend millions dollars to undergo chemotherapy or other forms of treatment. Likewise, if preventative health talks are being delivered adequately, more people would rather be spending their money when they are still healthy and disease-free to achieve a healthy lifestyle. For example, they will be allocating money on gym membership, stress management classes, organic vegetables and fruits or any other activities to live a balanced lifestyle.
To conclude, education in changing the perspective of people towards the definition of health should be carried out more often. The saying goes “prevention is better than cure”. I believe education is the key to reach an optimal health in every person holistically and this needs more funding to attain the success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eds more funding to attain the success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, still, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3875432526 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96350975325 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7456737481 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264440363704 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840634633313 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995661127015 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172769468698 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096875790831 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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