Some people propose that the majority of the national healty budget should be dispersed on health related education and precautious measures due to the adage of " prevention is better than cure". Personally, I reject this suggestion. I think the major health budget ought to spend on the caring of elders.
Firstly, the knowledge of keeping healthy contains in the education of students; therefore, no further investment is needed. As a matter of fact, students learn to maintain personal hydgine and remain physical fitness when they studying in school. For instance, taking shower everyday and regularly participating in sport are the content that student learnt from classroom. Thus. there is no demond on more budget on health-related education.
Moreover, preventative measures, like vaccines and condoms, are available to the whole population, which already incorperated in the country's health budget. The government stipulated the mandatory immunization via vaccines. Besides, People have effortless access to condoms in retailers in China. As a result, no further spending is required on the preventative measures.
Lastly and crucially, most age related desease cannot be prevented, where is the majority national budget spent. When a person become old, he will suffer from age related disease, such as diabetis, irregular blood pressure and vascular disease. That is where a person spend the money of medical fee on and the sector that the most national health budget is spend.
To recapitulate, I oppose the thought that allocate more budget on prevention rather than on cure. I appeal people to consider the realistic situation other than slavishly conform to that proverb.Actually, the dominant expenditure lies on the caring of old people, but not in education on health and measures of prevention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... in school. For instance, taking shower everyday and regularly participating in sport ar...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ent that student learnt from classroom. Thus. there is no demond on more budget on h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...at student learnt from classroom. Thus. there is no demond on more budget on health-r...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Actually
... than slavishly conform to that proverb.Actually, the dominant expenditure lies on the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50709219858 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97257259247 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4339442463 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307343481443 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086297029386 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090589508727 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161469657168 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10618534525 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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