The qualities that make someone admirable
Each person once thinks about how to be admired by others. An admirable person who is our role model can leave a strong inspiration on us. Getting to know which qualities make someone become a person we can admire helps us enhance, and achieve our goals.
Admirable people have three qualities in common. First, optimism is one of three qualities that makes someone admirable. People are usually affected by their surroundings. It is hard for people to stay positive all the time. When people encounter difficulties, they tend to be stressed and think about the worse results happening at first. However, optimistic people usually maintain a sense of optimism, and they believe that their actions will lead to positive things. These people will influence others to have positive thinking towards a problem. Honesty is another admirable trait. People gain others’ respect and admiration only if they are honest. For example, a good leader of a group or an organization needs to possess this quality to avoid mistakes and admit them whenever they commit an error. It will make other members of the organization admire and trust that leader. Finally, admirable people are confident. Confident people usually believe in themselves and their abilities in managing problems. Despite many obstacles in their life, they will successfully overcome them.
In conclusion, optimism, honesty, and confidence are the three qualities that make others admire. When people have these qualities, they deserve to become admirable people. If we want to become a person that we can admire, we need to know these qualities and improve ourselves for the better.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24621212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62962555425 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6063310444 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.25 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327505944988 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109649085819 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117163488779 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23960010502 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469631537276 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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