The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world can not be learnt from university or similar academic institute.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, attributes needed by an individual to attain success can't be learnt from a tertiary institution. In my view, I totally disagree with this because university education is what distinguishes a professional from others.
Attending a higher institute of learning distinguishes a professional from others. While in the institute he or she is taught both in character and in learning, so by virtue of their educational background they are able to think intellectually which gives them an edge over their contemporaries who are not well read. In other words, applying their knowledge in their business or career of choice they stand a better chance to excel and become more successful when compared to a person of lesser or no educational background. For instance in Nigeria, over 75% of business people, tend to go back to universities to acquire more knowledge and skills to enhance their business.
On the long run the they're able to learn more strategies and inadvertently become more successful.
Another point to consider is that a higher educational background is a determinant factor in running for a political post in the the government. Irrespective of your wealth or finance, without a high educational qualification you can't be dimmed fit for any post in any parastatal. This is so because, the public would prefer a person who is better educated and versatile in every areas and believing with their wealth of experience would govern them better than some one with little or no academic quality. For example, in my country Nigeria where the President has a limited level of schooling, the country is in chaos, because intellectually he is found wanting and can't be said to be successful.
I believe success is perceived by ones level of intellectual development and which can only be acquired from a higher institute.
To conclude, there are varied thought about what attributes is needed to be successful, but I believe that attending a university would stand you out, making you more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14242424242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12101941153 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3197608121 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.538461538 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172805090265 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648266503225 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551075830251 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104172399827 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584498781277 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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