Question:
The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel.
To what consequences may overpopulation lead?
In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
THE EARTH IS BECOMING OVERLY POPULATED WHICH CONTINUES TO AGGRAVATE THE PROBLEM OF LIMITED SUPPLIES OF WATER, FOOD AND EVEN FUEL. THIS ISSUE IS CAUSING MORE AND MORE NEGATIVE EFFECTS TO THE LIVES OF BILLION PEOPLE AND THEIR COUNTRIES IN THE WORLD. FOR THIS TO BE CONTROLLED, EVERYONE SHOULD WORK TOGETHER TO CONTROL THE GROWING POPULATION. THIS ESSAY WILL FURTHER DISCUSS THE DETRIMENTAL RESULTS IT MAY CAUSE AND POSSIBLE WAYS TO RESOLVE THIS PROBLEM.
OVER TIME, THE RISING NUMBERS OF PEOPLE ALL OVER THE WORLD HAD BEEN HARD TO CONTROL. AS A RESULT, MORE AND MORE CITIES BECAME OVER CROWDED WHICH MEANS LESS SPACE FOR EVERYONE TO LIVE COMFORTABLY. ANOTHER NEGATIVE EFFECT IS THE SPREAD OF A LOT OF DISEASES ESPECIALLY THE CONTAGIOUS ONES. IN LINE WITH HEALTH ISSUES, AS THE POPULATION RISE SO AS THE POLLUTION. NOISE, WATER AND AIR POLLUTION CONTINUE TO WORSEN EVERYDAY AS MORE AND MORE PEOPLE CONTRIBUTE TO THIS. IN ADDITION, THE DEMAND FOR WATER AND FOOD SUPPLIES INCREASES MAKING IT HARD TO SUSTAIN BECAUSE WE DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH RESOURCES. FINALLY, COUNTRIES WITH HIGHER PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE TEND TO EXPERIENCE MORE FINANCIAL AND ECONOMIC DIFFICULTIES. THESE UNWANTED RESULTS ARE ACTUALLY BEING SEEN ON SOME DEVELOPING COUNTRIES SUCH AS INDIA, PAKISTAN AND LIBYA WHERE A LOT OF HEALTH ISSUES AND FINANCIAL STRUGGLES ARE BEING REPORTED BECAUSE OF OVER POPULATION.
THE BATTLE FOR INCREASED POPULATION IN GOING TO BE A TOUGH ONE BUT THE POSSIBILITY OF WINNING WILL BE HIGHER IF EVERYONE WILL FIGHT TOGETHER. THE GOVERNMENT AND ITS PEOPLE SHOULD HELP EACH OTHER IN ORDER TO SUCCEED. I BELIEVE THAT THE GOVERNMENT CAN START BY IMPOSING ORDINANCES OR LAWS IN CONTROLLING THE NUMBER OF CHILDREN A COUPLE CAN HAVE. REPRODUCTIVE HEALTH PROGRAMS SHOULD BE CREATED IN ORDER TO PROVIDE REPRODUCTIVE HEALTH EDUCATION TO FAMILIES. IN THIS WAY, COUPLES WILL HAVE THE CHANCE TO LEARN SOME MEANS TO CONTROL CHILD BIRTH SUCH AS FAMILY PLANNING AND CONTRACEPTIVES. IT IS ALSO ESSENTIAL TO RAISE AWARENESS ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF A RISING POPULATION. CHINA IS AN EXAMPLE OF A COUNTRY THAT HAS A LAW WHICH ENCOURAGES EACH FAMILIES TO HAVE ONLY 1 OR 2 CHILD/CHILDREN.
IN THE END, OVER POPULATION IS ONE OF TODAYS ISSUES THAT SHOULD BE GIVEN MUCH TIME AND EFFORTS TO RESOLVE AS IT EFFECTS ARE ALARMING. THEREFORE, WE SHOULD WORK HAND IN HAND TO FIGHT THIS PROBLEM.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ER AND AIR POLLUTION CONTINUE TO WORSEN EVERYDAY AS MORE AND MORE PEOPLE CONTRIBUTE TO T...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.833333333333 0.247107183377 337% => Less nouns wanted.
Verbs: 0.0164319248826 0.155533422707 11% => Some verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.00469483568075 0.0946595960268 5% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0 0.0501214627716 0% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00234741784038 0.0437548338989 5% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0399061032864 0.122226691241 33% => More prepositions wanted.
Participles: 0.0 0.0403226058552 0% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75768281973 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0326793684256 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0140845070423 0.0861772015684 16% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00234741784038 0.021408717616 11% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2359.0 1933.35771543 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 316.048096192 124% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00254452926 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374045801527 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274809160305 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195928753181 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124681933842 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75768281973 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.037074148 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.2001728525 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7142857143 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.796751603 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.814263465372 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.1952017448 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 46.5 1.69124875643 2749% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357890787832 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0756006147972 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0425588814616 0.0668466124924 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482605522726 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101489425409 0.148594505496 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138372146544 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450058313181 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408189867007 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0602472628624 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25823916266 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327611429276 0.058150111329 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 0.0 10.4468937876 0% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.