In recent days, life shows a lot of possibilities to do while people are in pandemic of the coronavirus. In that sense, I agree with that idea because teleworking and internet give to the society two main arguments to think like that. The following lines will explain the reasons for this approach.
Talking about teleworking, it demonstrates how useful is for the companies and their employees during the decease. In case of companies, they are sure that economic activity continues because they receive information from their workers unless they are not in the office. And, for the employees, they can be safe, keeping the social distance, and doing their homework on time, using the technology. But, it is known that teleworking can solve some problems and promote others: sedentary, obesity and vision, for instance. Therefore, it is important to combine teleworking and exercises while people stay at home.
On the other hand, Internet provides a lot of information in order to occupy their time in reading news, listing music, talking with friends and family, for example. Those activities, and others, can be found on Internet, which provides many options to do during the day and night. Although people cannot go outside for the coronavirus, they can stay at home and feel comfortable because Internet brings a lot of thing to do, applying safety health protocols. However, people can get stress to stay too much time on Internet or staying all the day at home. For that, the recommendation is to keep a balance between internet and the other activities at home.
In conclusion, during these times, people have an important number of options to do in their life such us doing teleworking and browsing the Internet at home, specially, considering the healthy emergency around the world. But, society should consider the balance among those activities and the important to maintain and good health because they stay all the day in their house.
In recent days, life shows a lot of possibilities to do while people are in pandemic of the coronavirus. In that sense, I agree with that idea because teleworking and internet give to the society two main arguments to think like that. The following lines will explain the reasons for this approach.
Talking about teleworking, it demonstrates how useful is for the companies and their employees during the decease. In case of companies, they are sure that economic activity continues because they receive information from their workers unless they are not in the office. And, for the employees, they can be safe, keeping the social distance, and doing their homework on time, using the technology. But, it is known that teleworking can solve some problems and promote others: sedentary, obesity and vision, for instance. Therefore, it is important to combine teleworking and exercises while people stay at home.
On the other hand, Internet provides a lot of information in order to occupy their time in reading news, listing music, talking with friends and family, for example. Those activities, and others, can be found on Internet, which provides many options to do during the day and night. Although people cannot go outside for the coronavirus, they can stay at home and feel comfortable because Internet brings a lot of thing to do, applying safety health protocols. However, people can get stress to stay too much time on Internet or staying all the day at home. For that, the recommendation is to keep a balance between internet and the other activities at home.
In conclusion, during these times, people have an important number of options to do in their life such us doing teleworking and browsing the Internet at home, specially, considering the healthy emergency around the world. But, society should consider the balance among those activities and the important to maintain and good health because they stay all the day in their house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...eel comfortable because Internet brings a lot of thing to do, applying safety health protocols...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70397754079 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5801330566 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.266666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332413278821 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118382163196 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138262853858 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269043166603 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.270831826935 0.056905535591 476% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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