recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?
In the contempory world, the violent crime rate is increasing in children below 18 years of age. Also, experts says that lack of emotional and social support are the main factors which are responsible for such behavior. However, I completely agree with this notion and believe that parents’ and teachers ‘ guidance is compulsory for building moral values in children.
There are plethora of reasons which indicate the sorts of things that depart the children from gaining good values. Firstly, today adolescents are overburdened by their studies. They don’t have much time to socialize with the peers and learn attributes like sharing, co-operativeness and trust. Because of this, child is becoming introvert. For example- when a child meet with person of his age , he finds difficulty even to communicate . Secondly, children give more importance to play video games rather than going outiside to play outdoor games. Additionally, the content of video games are mostly based on fighting , wrestling and harming others, that influence the child behavior in wrong direction.
Furthermore, lack of parental supervision is one of the factors that initiate violent nature of the child. Today, most of the parents are working, so they don’t get enough time to spend with their offsprings , due to this reason, children involve in bad companies such as consuming drugs, consequently indulge in violent crimes to fulfil their needs that they cannot demand from parents. Despite this, the family disputes also generate the violence in the youngsters.
To conclude, number of factors which deprive the child from learning moral values and ethics which can be only altered from collaborative actions of parents, society as well as mentors to fasciliate good behavior of child and making him an ethical citizen of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31487889273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70724847086 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.143617017 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251446481816 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737885210596 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596133558662 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147196492545 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692998406891 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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