Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Natural talents and nurtured experiences are both essential for building someone’s personality. Some researchers believe the characteristics with our birth would affect our lives most significantly than any experiences else. It’s undeniable that some gifts or talents may bring a shortcut to someone’s success, however, I personally think those achievements are attributed to nurtured experience.
A person could be successful without talents, but making efforts is necessary. All the greatest scientists spend their whole lives on their work, even the smartest person ever-Einstein-worked over 120 hours per week. In the same way, good musicians can step on the international stage only by mass practicing. Also, talented persons need a good trainer to guide how to use their gifts properly, otherwise the gift may be abandoned for being misled. Some people outstand others when they are in early ages, but their abilities turn to be ordinary when they grow up. It’s a pity for these people who don’t take care of their talents, without training and practicing, some talents can’t be developed and will end up vanishing. Furthermore, Nurtured educations are also important. Family education and school education both contribute to building someone’s personality. It’s human nature to be self-interested, that’s why we need to be educated to conquer those natural weaknesses. A smart child could turn into a brilliant engineer, or a foxy offender, it’s depended on what kind of education the child received.
To sum up, the nurtured experience influence people’s lives much more than we realize. People have to watch out every step they take as it may lead to huge difference in their later lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, kind of, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57089552239 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25341253744 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3855590871 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177007875265 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059472227616 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749250950549 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146481231716 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553217532444 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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