Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Recently, the phenomenon of nature or nurture and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas loads of researchers elucidate that there is an inextricable relation between humans’ personality and their inborn characteristics, others are of the opinion that our personality is more influenced by experiences and environments. In my view, nature exerts influences on our personality far more than nurture.
Obviously, genes make humans as well as personality. According to enormous findings of scientists, a number of genes are responsible of forming humans’ personality, like being introvert of extrovert, talkative rather than remaining silent hours and hours. Meanwhile, some individuals manifest a great deal of bravery in their life or work due to they have no fear responsible genes. Hence, we are born along with our genes, and so the most significant factor which creates humans’ personality is gene.
Furthermore, in realm of psychology, the personality of children and their attitudes are strengthened during their first 3 years of life. Psychologists claim than infants are born with soft, pliable, but specific, types of personality and during 36 months after birth, those personalities are solidified by parents’ behavior. Consequently, youngsters’ behavior will be more resemble to their parents, like a closed cycle pattern.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of opponents. They maintain, children are like a piece of unspotted, white paper and experience and environment pens could write down miscellaneous beliefs and thoughts on children’s mind. For example, if an infant has experienced living in such desert areas as Arabian countries of Middle east, it is likely that they will become outgoing adults. The same conclusion can be taken into consideration for Russian babies, who are born and live in extremely cold climate. Then, they end up to behave indifferent manner.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea that the effects of genes and nature are far more important than environment and experiences. Eventually, like Shakespeare, nature or nurture, that’s the question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13795440002 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1159204925 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246627601817 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662134653554 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686181603674 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11790162876 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785643989005 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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