Research shows that business meetings and training are happening online nowadays.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is proven by research that, people are conducting discussion and training online rather than conventional face to face meeting. This method is conventional but at some extent lacks the ability to achieve it's goal. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of arranging meeting and training over the internet and show that indeed this system is convenient and cheaper than conventional system.
The main advantage of this is convenience. Training can be delivered anywhere in the world. This can be effective in remote areas where it is harder to reach because of poor communication. Other than that, employer can take the interview at almost anytime because the candidate does not have to go out to face the interview. For instance, almost all companies in UAE recruit employees from East Asia depending on electronic method. Another advantage is expense. Specially hiring trainer to train in different places is expensive which can be minimized by broadcasting the training materials using internet. This can cut the cost to almost zero. Fro example, trainer from any multinational company can provide training to all of their associates all over the world at the same time. Not only this is convenient but also it is less expensive because only training is being used to train in several places to train simultaneously.
On the other hand, it comes with few drawbacks as well. Not everywhere in the world has high-speed internet and in some places internet is comparatively expensive. As faster internet is a mandatory for this so slower intern would create disruption. For example, internet connection in country side are few times expensive than cities. Apart from that there is no way to get actual feedback over the internet which only a face to face discussion can offer which also dictates the discussion and training.
In conclusion, there are few disadvantages of not having to leave home to conduct a discussion or training but the advantages are far greater then it's drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: For
.... This can cut the cost to almost zero. Fro example, trainer from any multinational...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...rld has high-speed internet and in some places internet is comparatively expensive. As...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
Suggestion: greater than
... or training but the advantages are far greater then its drawbacks.
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ning but the advantages are far greater then its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10670731707 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83885668927 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542682926829 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.656127677 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127836800576 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041744955622 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479683109537 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855162086024 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512425580522 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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