Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that business conferences and training sessions are held online on a frequent basis in comparison to those in the previous times when the technology was not as fast-growing as it is today. Although the drawbacks of this trend are, indeed, a big concern for many of us, the positive aspects appear to be more significant.
Regarding the negative aspects, the availability and speed of the Internet connection might impose a number of challenges to many attendees if they cannot afford for a stable online account. In fact, interruption during the middle of the discussion due to any sudden breakdown of the unstable network connection of the users can lead to imperfect conferences with unpleasantness and dissatisfaction from others staff. In addition, it is a common case that many employees may find it difficult to thoroughly obtain the information included in the online instructions. This is because of the lack of face-to-face interaction and thus they are likely to lose their concentration on the formal meetings when attending for hours, especially international conferences where most of the staff come from different countries.
On the other hand, the employment of the online training platform shall be an intimate bridge connecting international organizations across borders, regardless of their geographical distance or daytime. This approach is more likely to push such companies to their fullest potentials since employees participating in the meetings or training have the opportunity to get exposed to a wide range of cultures and customs, thus their social networks and business allies are broadened significantly. Furthermore, another benefit when having discussions using applications on the Internet is associated with the fast pace of announcements or information being disseminated throughout the internal employee network. New marketing strategies or thorough understanding about customers' insights, for example, are disclosed to every member of the company, given a few clicks and a nick of time.
To conclude, the disadvantages involving technological fraud and lack of seriousness in participation should be taken into consideration, but I am of the opinion that companies' meetings or training programs do play a more essential role as they generate a number of beneficial values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32935996502 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2668203885 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.454545455 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4545454545 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113677188039 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402090254235 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334801833137 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697562900901 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156390414225 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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