In the recent years, online conferences for business, discussion or studying is gaining enormous popularity. Although meetings through the Internet creates both advantages and disadvantages, I believe the benefits are more significant.
To begin with, there are some useful advantages of online meetings. Firstly, vitual conferences save a lots time and money. Different from traditional meetings, organisers do not have to concern about the location and expenditures for a meeting, meanwhile participants can join in without travelling a long trip. Secondly, sharing information and documents in online conferences is faster, easier and more convenient. For instant, a student can slideshow his or her assignment so that it can be edited and revised by others students and the teacher.
Beside some advantages, meeting through the Internet also has several disadvantages. One of those is that online meetings depents a lots in technology. In fact, participants can face with slow Internet connection and platform malfunction, which affects badly to the success of a meeting. Moreover, this kind of conference might be unconvenient for the elderly, who has many difficulties in using technology and the Internet. Another drawback is online conferences lack of direct interaction. As the consequence, some people will have less concentration in the meeting, students might find hard to connect to friends or understand the lecture.
In conclusion, vitual conferences has both pros and cons. However, with mentioned merits, online meetings are becoming more and more popular, suitable in this present era. So, I emphasize that the benefits are much greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63346613546 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13120037732 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1291431512 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121077945928 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423291675529 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435817206756 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807437473921 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304722096539 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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