Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
A question many people have to ask themselves is whether the trend of online working truly benefits for employers. On one hand, I am inclined to believe that saving time is the main point when it comes to online business discussion. On the other hand, hardly can we deny that every time and again working on social platforms might trigger meaningless conflicts or misunderstandings.
To assess the reason why many individuals have a craving for working online instead of face-to-face interaction, we must bring potential advantages of teleprocessing into focus. Assuming one’s accommodation was far from his workplace, he could directly access and join in any business meetings without sweating. Not only can staff avoid the duties of performing projects on time, but the manager will also create strong bonding and mutual understanding with company members. In addition, you are able to do your job in either vacations or family house without work depressions. On top of that, the less mediocre time you spend on your business firm, the more quality time you gather with other family members.
Although so far, one can readily draw the conclusion that remote working is advantageous, we must put the disadvantages of this trend into perspective before judging whether we should maintain online working habits or not. Difficulty sticking routine or missing important calls, one can miss his chance of a lifetime in his successful path. For instance, you might have struggles whenever you have to ask a super quick question, which only will available in a real workplace. Another issue that many individuals have to face is boredom, which reduces one’s productivity and sets off mental exhaustion.
In conclusion, telecommuting certainly is beneficial and loads of businesses are tempted to adopt this arrangement of work. From my personal perspective, though, it is unlikely that teleworking will replace the traditional form of brick-and-mortar workplace, due to the underlying disadvantages of it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35015772871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07738367457 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627760252366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3424957656 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954376155555 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323085939394 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274151049888 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582207588302 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208021287044 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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