Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Heritage site are the precious monuments and it reflect the roots of human culture. Some expert claim that, preservation of old premises is most important to protect history, while other argue that, spending more on new construction and roadways are important in the era of globalization. I strongly agree to protect heritage building and the essay will examine the arguments on the favour of the topic.
To begin with, huge amount of money was spending in conservation of ancient property in the world and this is most important to protect culture and to hand over our tradition, culture and custom to next generation. For example, we can see many old sites, originally built in many thousand ago and still they are in conservation. For which we fell lucky to get to know about our history. Similarly, the old building reflects our ancient living hood and it help to recognize of root of our existence. For instance, Nepal has spent many millions amount to rebuilt the various heritage site which was demolished by the earthquake, to preserve the traditional arts and craft. It is also the prestige of nation and the one of the strong media for the recognition all over the world.
Such as, the recent survey has revealed that, above 60% of tourist select their destination only to visit different heritage and ancient premises. Although, many people know about our small country Nepal because of all these listed monuments in world heritage site. Moreover, which can be milestone to uplift the economy of nation.
In conclusion, preserving heritage sites are more important to announced our existence in the world and save our history. So, conservation of old premises are much more important in recent time and in future as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
... site are the precious monuments and it reflect the roots of human culture. Some expert...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...reflects our ancient living hood and it help to recognize of root of our existence. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01374570447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68451092061 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1279360512 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100966169115 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354960369751 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262155485085 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602152851882 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032096760789 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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