With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indisputable that news has become part of our life. Due to advanced technology and internet, it is argued that newspapers will become extinct in the near future, while I disagree with this approach as it is the most reliable source of information.
To embark on it, there are multifarious reasons why I believe that physical newspaper will continue. First and foremost, internet is not much used by elderly. So, they rely on the printed newspaper for getting updated. For instance, in the survey of Times of India showed that 60% of newspapers readers are aged people and they do not have adequate knowledge about internet. As a result, printed newspaper will retain its popularity among the people. Another is, it is very cheaper and handy. What I mean, people can buy newspapers for spending a travel time as they read it on bus or train. Furthermore, internet is expensive as compared to newspapers and some of regions do not have proper internet connection. Hence, people of this regions will definitely rely on the printed newspaper.
Another point to consider is that information are accurate and true on the physical newspapers rather than on the internet. In other words, journalists find proper news and put some efforts to make articles, then after it is corrected by many sources before publishing. Consequently, most of the people would prefer to read newspapers. Moreover, if individuals read newspapers, then it would be beneficial to them. It is better to read on physical newspaper than on the computer screen. Hence, eyes of people will not be affected by traditional newspapers.
In conclusion, although in the fast pace world, e-news has gained popularity, printed newspapers will not be disappeared in the future. Thus, I believe that printed newspaper will be the main source of information in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the regions') or simply say ''some regions''.
Suggestion: some of the regions; some regions
...expensive as compared to newspapers and some of regions do not have proper internet connection....
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...r internet connection. Hence, people of this regions will definitely rely on the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8572861497 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3714465485 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9473684211 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233263274837 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687711820387 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539835402012 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138986818692 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635246653136 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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