the role of goverment in environmental protection.
Environmental pollution is a global issue that needs to be addressed as soon as possible by both the government and the individuals. My following essay will give a clear explanation to the role of the government in protecting our nature.
At the outset, there is no denying that it is crucial to nurture people’s awareness about environmental protection. Workshops, organizations should be held with the aim of instilling the magnitude and the urgency of taking proactive measures to save the earth into the psyche of each and every member of the society. Besides, education also needs to take responsibility in inculcating students, the young generation into being fully conscious of this acute problem and follow the rules as well as come up with many new solutions to tackle it. Only when the government succeeds in raising human’s understandings about the gravity of environmental deterioration, can other remedies take effect.
Furthermore, strict laws must be utilized to take control over the great damage that human do to the earth. Enshrining in laws some regulations about environmental protection such as a limit on the volume of waste and detrimental substances are highly likely to diminish the severity of pollution. Along with that, heavy punishments should be applied to every destructive behaviours to bar individuals as well as companies, factories from contributing any harm to the environment. Methodical tests ought to be placed on the process of treating raw wastes before being discharged directly into the environment, which will make enormous contribution to creating a fresher, healthier world for our future generation.
Last but not least, the utility of the advancement of technology plays an integral part in decreasing the harm people have done to the nature. Initially, in all probability, with the advent of modern technology waste treatment and recycling process will be much more efficacious, which can bring positive outcome in pollution prevention. Furthermore, making use of high tech in seeking and developing renewable energy is capable of reducing not only human’s reliance on natural resources but also the toxic smoke and substances that factories pump out every day.
To recapitulate, I believe that people’s understanding, laws and technology are there determinate factors the government should focus on to bring a better world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, so, still, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48387096774 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23160321456 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60752688172 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8075904007 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.714285714 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116085684534 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411304919699 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496896303672 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576000885977 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048465016654 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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