Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the advance of the Internet allows children get more information than ever, learning from physical school is considered not to be till essential. While it is true that studying at home through the Internet has become more effective for children, I believe that school still plays a vital role in their education.
To begin with, there are several reasons why learning from the Internet at home enables children to study better. Firstly, thanks to a huge available source of information on the Internet, young learners have the opportunity to acquire more knowledge. Children, for example, might access many videos and documents associated with biology subjects on the Internet rather than some of these material provided by their teacher at school. This helps them have a deeper understanding of their subjects, and also remember longer. Secondly, children are likely to study at their own pace. This is because the availability and convenience of the Internet allows children to study whenever they want and whatever they could easily acquire at home. Thus, making them not be fallen behind in their education path.
However, I believe educating children at school is extremely important. The first reason is that the source of knowledge these individuals gain from well-educated teachers is more accurate than online information. For instance, it is proven that studying online at home might lead children to misunderstand several basic issues in life compared to going to physical schools. Additionally, the educational environment in schools encourages children to develop their social skills. For example, they have more chances to learn how to communicate effectively and how to solve conflicts with their classmates, making them a better preparation to enter life. If learning from home through the Internet, children will find it struggling to live in real life later on.
In conclusion, although children could study well at home by taking advance of the Internet, I argue that their schooling is till necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...However, I believe educating children at school is extremely important. The first...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35202492212 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78875539727 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9468788865 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265752821275 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100948371225 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643576150372 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192215545077 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312977032874 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.