Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Scientific research is necessary for the development of human. Some people believe that it should be conducted and monitored by the governments instead of private organizations. This essay disagrees with the claim for two main reasons: governments lack manpower to carry out various types of scientific research and governments are not financially capable of investing equal amounts of resources in each single matter either.

Governments that want to do and control scientific research themselves must acquire a large enough number of qualified scientists to carry out researches on tons of different topics, which is unrealistic and impossible. Meanwhile, at other private companies, scientists are hired to only focus on researching and making new discoveries about certain matters. For instance, Novo Nordisk from Switzerland is a private scientific company that concentrates on diabetes type 2 and haemophilia research, and has successfully helped treat more than 20 million of patients around the world, which shows the pivotal role of private institutions in scientific research.

On top of that, scientific research is costly and longitudinal, thus, requires huge investments; governments are unable to finance all scientific research projects because there are many more matters they have to deal with. A new drug development may take up to 30 years and millions of dollars while governments have limited resources mainly derived from national taxes for different purposes: education, healthcare, infrastructure etc. In contrast, private institutions can raise funds for a particular matter more easily with private investors and stock holders. For example, Oxford Vacmedix was able to close a 12-million series A funding solely for cancer vaccine research. Substantial funding for such a specific matter cannot be obtained by governments.

It is, in the end, reasonable to conclude that governments should not have the total execution and control of scientific research and private firms’ participation is necessary.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72607260726 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11877870309 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0319371589 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360993648391 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128001563397 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785686225813 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234202343316 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714755711735 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments