Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people think the development have a positive impact, others think it is negative. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, after several decades of development, computer technology has reached an unprecedented prosperity and it is likely to continue improving in the future. After AlphaGo, a super computer as well as a virtual chess player, defeated the most brilliant player, it became a consensus that the intelligence of computers will exceed humans’. From my perspective, although it may cause some problems and concerns, it will be beneficial to individuals and society as a whole.
On the one hand, increasingly smart computers enable to solve some important problems which are too complicated to tackle by human being. Undoubtedly, regardless of the fact that human beings have evolved several times in the long history, we still fail to address many scientific and medical problems. For example, various diseases such as cancers are still cannot be eliminated. It is more likely for computers which possess a powerful calculation ability to accomplish these problems.
On the other hand, developments of computers’ intelligence also contribute to humans’ convenience. It is not difficult to image that the smarter computers can help and even replace humans to do some boring work, such as packing, delivering, driving and so on. It is reported, recently, many big technology companies have the plan to develop and test non-driver cars, which can release humans on the roads and reduce the rate of traffic accidents.
It is admittedly that computers, with higher intelligence, may lead to some problems in our society. Firstly, due to the increasing smart and complex computer system, it is hard for authorities to regular and oversee the Internet. In addition, the replacing of human labors will inevitably result in the unemployment.
In conclusion, there is not any denying that computers are becoming more intelligent than us. While I believe, with suitable regulations in confining the use of supercomputer, more benefits than problems will surface with this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...duce the rate of traffic accidents. It is admittedly that computers, with high...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12136705329 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4895475309 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224706739106 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720549456794 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494722231184 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118472165521 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379071019207 0.056905535591 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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