Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated using community service programs for instance, before being reintroduced to society? What is your opinion?
An often debated topic is whether long term prison sentences have more benefits than rehabilitation and re-education programs for offenders or not. From my standpoint, training and rehabilitation programs have more advantages, as will now be explained.
On one hand, I think criminals leaving prison after long periods of incarceration find it hard to adapt to life on the outside because they are conditioned by life in prison. Also, most of prisoners are poor and uneducated with no useful skills needed for earning money. Therefore, it would be hard for them to have normal behavior socially and to find a paid employment. so the chance of re-offending after release from prison would be high.
On the other hand, training programs can help delinquents develop practical skills which help them to find a job to make a living outside the prison. In addition, rehabilitation programs have many benefits for criminals. For example, they help lawbreakers make the right choices in life and avoid anti-social behaviors. Moreover, these programs can alleviate the social exclusion of offenders and their families which help them have a more normal life in the society.
In conclusion, it is true that crime is morally wrong and criminals must encounter with the consequences of their misdeed, in my opinion putting convicts behind bars for long time have more negative effects on prisoners than rehabilitation and training programs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the prisoners; most prisoners
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Suggestion: So
...socially and to find a paid employment. so the chance of re-offending after releas...
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Suggestion: help them find
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29257641921 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94989721119 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3480695895 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.181818182 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184846311638 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792693638378 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045298345752 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119431829782 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044350485393 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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