Should sports classes be scarified in high schools so students can concentrate on academic subjects?
We live in 21th century, in which not only education is vital, but also sports are important. Some schools or collages scarified the sports, because they think sports is nasty effect on education of seed, but sports can lead many pros to us.
First of all, sports are a part of our life. Sports bring many advantages for folk. Sport is one type of exercise. With the help of sport classes, children learn sports, if, children take sports as a profession, then they earn hansom money in future. Furthermore, seed can concentrate on education, because people mind needs to refreshment also, and these are provide by sports.
Albeit, we can maintain our physical body in a good shape. Sports not only provide exercise, but also maintain our mind power. People can evolutes various skills such as, sportsman spirit, decision making skill etc. Folk can get better knowledge of sports, if schools should established sport classes.
On the flip side, sport classes may be divert children’s mind from the education. Sometimes, they are tired due to the sport classes and could not focus on the education. If, seed mainly focus on sport classes, then there are chance to be fail in exam. But, according to psychology, folk needs different test of life. So, with the help of sports, people fulfill their interest and can be better concentrate on education.
To pen down, I would like to say that, education is a really important for our success, but sports can be help of people to feel refreshment throughout day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...profession, then they earn hansom money in future. Furthermore, seed can concentrate on e...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...eeds to refreshment also, and these are provide by sports. Albeit, we can maintain ou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281045751634 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.133986928105 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686274509804 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490196078431 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0392156862745 0.0437548338989 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114379084967 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0130718954248 0.0403226058552 32% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.55899816125 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261437908497 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00326797385621 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.0457516339869 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0359477124183 0.021408717616 168% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00326797385621 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1518.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90661478599 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334630350195 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233463035019 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163424124514 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108949416342 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55899816125 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.8498585243 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1176470588 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1785269621 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 38.4639505608 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.83823529412 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274435364331 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095453918942 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872564712658 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518574285902 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174763210643 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978010872923 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068852498551 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245941593411 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0872595716246 0.0638462369009 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164963337162 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487355550516 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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