Should traffic jams be handled by government or individuals?
In recent years, traffic congestion has become an inevitable phenomenon happening every single hour all around the world. In order to alleviate traffic jams, mutual responsibility should be taken charge of not only by the whole society but also by each individual.
In term of society, the number of vehicles could be cut off by physical or aware approaches. First, the infrastructure should be upgraded as narrow lands act as a deterrent for vehicles to travel. In reality, many developed countries build up the road with four or six lands, which contribute to the decrease in traffic jams, even in urban areas. Second, in case that the economy health does not provide enough budgets, launching lawsuits appear to be the practical method. For example, the government can limit cars parking along the streets by laying restrictions for parking cars with odd and even license' numbers at different periods of time.
On individual aspect, each travellers can reverse the situation by changing their daily habits such as cars' utilization and unnecessary travels in rush hours. First, if people turn for other means of transport that save more spaces, congestion can be directly solve. Moreover, that citizens, especially who live in city center, might consider to become pedestrians or bikers benefits the individual and the community as well. Finally, the ultimate approach is to shorten the period of rush hours. Without emergency, travellers should avoiding crowded roads in order not to make them stuffy.
In conclusion, minimizing traffic congestion should not be burdened only by the society but also by each individual. The key to minimization is comprised of physical and aware approaches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...ach individual. The key to minimization is comprised of physical and aware approaches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26937269373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7965513779 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5704589379 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231516933648 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680543417934 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554715080089 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135653256049 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230944114744 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.