Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The fact that the multinational corporations are now expanding more and more make the small businesses to become bankrupt and turns out to have both positive and negative impacts. This essay will explain why the drawbacks of this development outweighs the benefits.
Firstly, the advantages of having multinational in a particular country is the local employment which the companies often provide. When a company or a plant are being built, they need not only material resource but man resource as well. Thus, many local people will be hired and potentially it will reduce the unemployment rate in a country. Small business also can provide the similar things, however the employees which they need are not so many as the big companies. As a result, the effect may be insignificant. For example, Starbucks Company, a multinational coffee shop company, are hiring many local citizens in Semarang, Indonesia, and this results the decreasing rate of unemployment in that area from 11% to 8%. Many small coffee shops are also being open up, however like what it is explained before, the employment number is just too small to be noticed.
However, multinational corporations also can become the source of environment pollution. Often they produce many products at once, making they make a lot of waste, which is dangerous for environment. Although many factors can be addressed in terms of environment violation, one of the biggest factor is the existence of big companies in the area. In China, there are so many raw-material companies for pharmaceutical usage. Currently those corporations are being criticized because of the ecological pollution. They are accused for the destruction of many rivers in China. Moreover, companies which are having so many branches in many countries also not always pro on the local workers. Despite of their generosity to recruit the local resource, they are often treated badly. Perhaps because the multinational companies are aiming for their own profits, so the may reduce the expenses as low as possible - including the salary of their worker.
To conclude, it is true that multinational corporations are making a good way to reduce unemployment rate, however the costs of their existence are believed to overcome the benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23901098901 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97872609641 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4145874661 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.368421053 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201463219739 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625873575642 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415967328521 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122283715701 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655137844588 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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