Nowadays communication became much easier with the help of new communicating devices, thanks to technology.However, some people of the view that its disadvantages are more when comparing with advantages. But in my view its benefits outshine the detrimental effects.
To begin with, communication with these devices is fast ,safe, accurate comparing to the devices which used in the past. In those days, people mainly depend on telephone and letter writing in order to communicate with their relatives and friends. The time consume letter to reach the destination and cost of telephone calls made communication difficult in those times. But today the scenario has changed tremendously , with the help of new technology our communication devices are thousand times faster than the old ones. The incidents, messages reached in wrong hands were also too high a few decades before. After the arrival of internet everything changed . Now communication is fast, safe and accurate . For example, it used to take more than two weeks to reach a letter in the USA from India where as now its just a matter of seconds to send a e mail to the USA.
Another important point is, multi national companies benefited a lot from this advancements. They can run a meeting with their country heads who is staying in a different country thorough the on line video calling applications. Subsequently , they can reach in better decisions very soon in order to earn more profits. The ups and downs in share markets happening in less than second so they need to act appropriately suddenly with the help of new communication devices it is possible now.
To conclude, the benefits of new communication devices brings a lot of benefits to our day to day life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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...ay the scenario has changed tremendously , with the help of new technology our com...
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...echnology our communication devices are thousand times faster than the old ones. The inc...
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...video calling applications. Subsequently , they can reach in better decisions very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, for example, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03484320557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02616686644 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6709921522 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169430810814 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557960021281 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592583975954 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106436358955 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04069711881 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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