Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that whether curbing advertisement will be productive for public or not. Some people conceive a notion that such promotions are detrimental and should be completely stopped. On the other hand, few individuals are of the opinion that advertisements are vital to society. I support the later side at larger extent and the reasons for my perception are elucidated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost argument I put forth is that advertisement is essential to consumers to understand the current trend in the market. In the other words, promotional materials such as billboards, pemplates, television advertisements provide necessary information to buyers to make a wise decision about their purchase. In turn, they can have best commodity with their hard earn money. For example, if a person is looking to buy a new cell phone, through advertisement he/she can understand all the features available in different phones in the market and can buy according to one's need.
Additionally, these advertisements keep competition at highest level in the market. Consequently, consumers are winning as companies try their level best to beat the competitors collectively in both price and product quality. Nowadays through internet and televisions people always get best of their money by finding great deals and discounts. These can not be achieved without advertisement. Furthermore, manufactures are always on their toes to find new ways to cut their cost and improve their products by finding revolutionary and better technology.
On the other hand, we can not deny the impulse buying that the society does due to advertisements. After seeing flashy advertisements and great deals people purchase products that are unnecessary. They indulge themselves in looking for deals to buy products and avail their precious time and hard earn money in complete useless products. according to Atlantic Canadian newspaper, 19% of Canadians buy unnecessary products yearly due to advertisement.
To summarize and recapitulate, from aforementioned deliberation it is quite conspicuous that although advertisements advertisements render people to make unnecessary purchases, it is the driving force behind information and competition that the society needs to have better products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02657004831 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1815333741 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8524755408 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.611111111 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581009604133 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251741138634 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206833000626 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449144646301 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195463161819 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.99 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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