Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
It has always been a controversial issue over whether the international organization or national government should response to multitude problems about environment. Even though some people argue that the latter alternative could address current situation better. I firmly believe that both approaches are required in world’s environmental development.
It is an undeniable fact that no one could understand the problems as well as local governments. This is necessary for them to deal with local residents, conveying deleterious situation and plan to solve deterioration of natural which is made by human. In addition to reducing against from some group of people, government could cooperate with people in their region and monitoring status of problem together. For instance, farmers probably use pesticide in agricultural, in this case, government can show other ways to increase the amount of crop by using organic compound instead of imposing strict measures by the international organization. Moreover, authorities could decrease interruption from the risked organization. The intervention also fluctuates economic and stability in their country.
On the other hand, supporting fund from organization to developing country would be much better off. People who support this viewpoint say that tackling environmental problem alone probably could cost big budget. Also, they argue that we should rely on the international organizations due to experiences from many cases around the world. They can induce appropriate and effective methods. Hence, we can joint to the organization and understand practical solutions.
In conclusion, there are strong arguments for each side. It is reasonable to take advantage of both major responsible mans, by working together, so as to identified and solve problems definitely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o multitude problems about environment. Even though some people argue that the latter alter...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... responsible mans, by working together, so as to identified and solve problems definitel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80669144981 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22732679755 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661710037175 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1884303019 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178712550236 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503211453613 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551040931915 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108324508669 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213678820322 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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