Some believe that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that such games are useful for them. State the advantage and disadvantage and give your opinion.
It is believed computer games are dangerous for children. However, some people argue such games have more advantages. Although these can help children improve the problem solving, It is claimed that such games reduce their academic performance.
One benefit of playing computer games can enhance problem solving skills of children, improving their thinking skills. That is to say, when the young play the games, they need to think in many possible ways, because such games challenge them to complete levels with many different difficulties. For example, Thai kids playing DOTA ONE should decide 2-minute-effective strategies to fight the bots from 1st-10th level, having critical thinking to win the matches, impacting to be creative to tackle daily problems. Despite the fact that this might be acceptable, I think children who spend their time playing such games can get addicted easily, so it can negatively affect their studies.
However, the drawback of spending time on PC games can decrease students’ ability to score good grades in their exams. In other words, they are more likely to have less time to concentrate on their studies, as they put too much their energy, efforts, and time playing such games, and this results in them leaving behind in the class. For example, in 2018, most Jakarta’s students might be incapable to result A score in national examination due to wasting everyday time on Counter-Strike at night over 8 hours, suffering from sleep deprivation, lacking of concentration, then the study pace was too slow. Therefore, games tend to intervene students’ attainment at school.
In conclusion, in spite of PC games being beneficial in terms of nurturing youngsters’ problem solving skills, I believe this could have adverse effects in their education. Where possible, students are taught to manage their time when playing such games as to prevent them from such interruptions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... challenge them to complete levels with many different difficulties. For example, Thai kids pl...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it can negatively affect their studies. However, the drawback of spending time o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32236842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80253119415 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1864902046 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2387960698 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115684481539 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110844160165 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180729663459 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095462495742 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... challenge them to complete levels with many different difficulties. For example, Thai kids pl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it can negatively affect their studies. However, the drawback of spending time o...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32236842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80253119415 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1864902046 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2387960698 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115684481539 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110844160165 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180729663459 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095462495742 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.