Some believe that people are naturally born leaders, while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a big question that the debate about innate talent or practice, which is better? Some people think that a child is born with leadership qualities will later become a leader while some believe that to become a leader, people need to practice skills. I completely agree that people must practise to become a leader an this essay will discuss both of views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, some people believe that there are people opine that leadership. This argument base on some individuals are born strong, leading from children to classmates or even their peers, then later, these people become leaders with their abilities. To illustrate the point, there are certain innate traits that make some people destined to become leaders. There is always a significant difference between “learn a skill” and “master a skill”. Just like some people are born with a special talent for music or sports, they will naturally stand out in that area.
On the other hand, some people believe that only learning can be successful, just as it takes practice to become a leader. Leadership is a set of skills that can be learned through training, awareness, practice and experience over time, learning leadership is a lifelong learning process. For example, The military has also shown support for this doctrine, as evidenced by their leadership training programs. To strengthen, a leader need to learn knowledge about a big field, need to learn how to manage their members, so what happen if leaders do not know a topic? Obviously, they cannot be born to know, only have to learn.
In conclusion, I completely agree that only practise can become a good leader but some individuals have strength to become a leader, obviously, if people do not learn skills, they cannot become a realistic leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98355263158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57546883759 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2769113989 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340964083206 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122835925436 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085884684034 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214060533874 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746563518969 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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