People think that children can study a lot of things from watching television so children is advisable watch screen tv by both school and at home . I partially agree with this
On the one hand , I believe that , there are various TV programs in Norway , which can help young people in enrich knowledge and release stress the stressful after school hours . For examples , in the Vietnam , Cartoon Network or HBO , star movies programs not only help children gain stress but also it can help those learn english . Specially , television programs as discovery which can assists people in open knowledge about cultures and traditions in a lot of international of the world
On the other hand , i don't think so , watching television is advantages for children . Because of , children watch various tv programs which makes young people don't enjoy outdoor activity , therefore people can make a lot of patiences about obesity and eye such as myopic . Moreover , it can make reduce learning outcome of children at school .
In conclusion , in my opinion , watching tv can bring various advantages and positive for children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07182320442 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67964036816 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6359660733 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343871920232 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191392261274 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108969687255 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25470790376 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106649202701 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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