Some cites have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, a number of cities have rules on designing and construction in the way building is built. Some say that they need freedom of designing of their houses and factories as per their ways. In this essay, I will explain both benefits and demerits of the argument and why I think the advantages of having the freedom to design is superior.
Those who believe that when a limit in the structure of buildings has positive developments have their justifications. When authorities ban certain things in terms of designing a building, companies will not use more spaces for expanding offices and factories. This leading to more trees will save, resulting in more benefits to the environment such as clean air, more rain, and many more. A law, for instance, has shown since limits were put on the designing of houses and corporations by the Canadian government in 2009, nearly 45% more chances of raining and 50% of decrement in polluted air happened. Hence, the less space will use for businesses, the more benefits to living conditions.
If people have the right of designing their own houses and workplaces, it will bring satisfaction to them. This may be leading them to have better productivity and creativity, resulting in fewer chances of having mental disorders and family problems. For example, a survey by the University of Yale showed that over a majority of 10, 000 people in California found happier since they moved into their designed dream houses than those who do not. Therefore, the more people have their dream houses with their preferred designs and colors the more they live happily.
In Conclusion, although having a limit in designing of living and working areas which has benefits to the environment, still people have chances to have a mental illness. In my words, despite having a number of advantages to nature, it is necessary for people to have the freedom to design their offices and home, because it will give them peace.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95440729483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69795836044 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4289122122 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271780341952 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105773184824 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059937128316 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188460228488 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810805402683 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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