In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
Recent decades have witnessed people tend to giving birth for children later than before in several nations all over the world. In this essay, I will discuss about this trend and its influences on society and family life.
First of all, I believe that having children in the later stages of life can caused by numerous reasons. One of the discernible one is that citizens want to have more concentrate on career growth and further education. Indeed, with the development of technology, the standard of life for residents are increasingly improvement therefore they have a tendency to put higher targets of life for themselves. As a result, ambitious people will spend time on achieving theirs aims, for example: entering further courses or getting promotion in jobs. Additionally, adults also want to get a well-preparation before giving birth because having a child constantly brings various unprecedented things for parents, for example: how to taking care for toddlers or educating kid which do not become a burden for society in the future.
Notwithstanding, this trend can bring several impacts on society and family life. In term of society life, having a child later can lead to the lack of workforce-needed areas. When parents give birth quite later, this will decrease the quality of workforce, especially the employee-needed jobs, such as: construction, transportation and agriculture. Consequence, these occupations can be rarity in later life. Furthermore, concerning family aspect this trend can make a burden to children when they grow up. Because when parents are getting older, their kids can be to young and do not have sufficient economic ability too look after their parents. As a result, there are an enomous amount of money can be spent on health care for aged population.
Inconclusion, I think that focusing on career growth and further education and well-preparation of having children can make people want to giving birth later in life. Besides, this phenomenon can affect social life as the lack of some employee-needed jobs as well as family life because of having a burden for young people when they grow up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18443804035 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98420795143 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527377521614 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8192471481 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278972466303 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106998222884 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685980359841 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200708044054 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262344922682 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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