Evidence suggests that a growing number of people are likely to gain weight and consequently their health put in jeopardy. Although there are specific causes behind this issue, effective policies can be taken to solve the problem.
To begin with, the most rational justification is people's inadequate diet which leads them to be overweight. Simply put, nowadays, a majority of people especially women who almost provide food for the rest of their family work full time as an employee. That is to say, they do not have enough time to prepare a healthy meal, hence, they tend to use prepared food such as fast foods or tinned foods. Take countries like America which possesses the highest obesity rate in the world as an example. The large scale experts illustrate that fast foods made up more than three-quarters of its people's diet. The more people use ready and fast food the more they would get on weight.
There are also some workable solutions to cope with this phenomenon. Firstly people should be more careful about their regime, replacing carbohydrates and fats with fresh vegetables. They ought to avoid junk foods that have low nutritional value and make them obese and ill. Moreover, they should place an exercise or even a simple walking program in their daily schedules. It helps them to have a healthy body, prevent overweight, and keep them in shape. A good illustration of this is employees like computer programmers who often sit in a definite place all day long and do not have any movement. This in turn, will increase the average weight of people which causes lots of diseases such as heart attack and blood pressure.
To sum of, people are afflicted by obesity because of many reasons, the most important of them is improper diet. Admittedly, I believe that having healthy food along with doing exercise reduce the obesity rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... food for the rest of their family work full time as an employee. That is to say, they do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62738853503 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50439185817 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4527184874 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187994209276 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595825340314 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038477383182 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119911342543 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478801222215 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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