In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Despite being aware of the hazardous impact of obesity on health, people around the world became more aggravated than they used to be. This essay will discuss the major causes of this issue and suggest a number of vital solutions to untangle it.
The main causes of increasing body weight and decreasing fitness levels are the sluggish lifestyles of people and excessive usage of junk food. Fast food companies are investing in advertisements to promote their products on TV and the internet. As we know, these commercials make unhealthy food seem extremely tempting. As a result, people especially children unconsciously want to cram unhealthy foods. Unfortunately, excessive consumption of fast food leads to obesity.
Another factor enhancing cases of obesity is the sluggish lifestyle of people. Due to the growing school and work pressure, children, as well as adults, do not have spare time to work out. Notwithstanding, even when people are free, instead of working out in a gym, they prefer to watch a movie on the TV or computer. This way of life has an adverse impact on their health.
When it comes to solutions, there are several solutions for untangling this issue. Promoting health awareness among people and eliminating food advertisements are the best ways to untangle this issue. Once humanity is aware of the adverse effect of obesity, they are more likely to take action to change their lifestyle. Another solution is to ban misleading food advertisements that target children. Punishing these companies may be a solution, consequently, all these factors and solutions depend on the government.
To conclude, humanity shouldn’t underestimate the growing cases of obesity and should assemble to be strong opponents in front of these troubles.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18374558304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86004369144 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2787822104 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165474301327 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048398011414 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516293651957 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854746386929 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317780016319 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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