In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures should be taken to solve them.
Nowadays, increasing the average weight and loss of health fitness is a common phenomenon in some countries, especially developed nations. There are lots of reasons account for these problems, which most relates to their lifestyle as well as their knowledge and we should propose some measures to encounter with.
Both the decrease of health or fitness and the overweight of people in wealthy countries have been more popular. Firstly, due to the higher income recently and the food industries development, there are many products which contain more sugar and carbohydrates that will harm our body. Moreover, their eye-catching appearance and flavor may attract not only children but also their parents and other adults. Besides, the lack of knowledge about food or the guidelines about the worse further effects is not enough to alert the consumers including fatty food or drinking alcohol and beer. Last but not least, the over workload makes people spend more time sitting and technology innovations such as robots make us feel lazier to do exercises. Therefore, that secondary lifestyle is responsible for keeping fit and overweight problems.
The importance of solving those issues is obviously an emergency and requires proper measures. The government should advance the civilian knowledge about their health and food, establish more exercise clubs and encourage people walking or cycling to work. Individuals must be aware of the serious effects of an inactive lifestyle and reduce their weight positively.
In conclusion, inadequate perspective will be the main cause so raising people's awareness to deal with those phenomenons and individuals strive is significantly necessary.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50769230769 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79344117702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2552217859 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234793866479 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076142207678 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059289800959 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133762302334 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605235773596 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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