In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People from several countries across the world are suffering from obesity and numerous health implications. The main culprit behind this is lack of exercise and availability of fast food and raising awareness and making fitness centers available to the people can help to confront this problem.
The prime reason behind this is lack of exercise. Actually, our nature of work forced us to lead a sedentary lifestyle. Office workers have to sit all day long behind a computer desk. This made them lazy and at the same time left them not enough time for exercise. Such as, regular office time is eight hours per day but it may even be pushed to to ten to twelve hours. This system does not allow us to have enough time for exercise and that leas to unhealthy lifestyle. While people being lazy they became reluctant to cook and look for alternative options which has lead to another problem that is consuming fast food. Burger, pizza, fries contains one of the highest amount of calories and while we do not do enough physical work these extra calories left in our body unused is making us fat. This phenomena is also fueled by availability of fast food stores which people finds really convenient and easy alternative to cooking.
The simple straightforward solution could be making people aware of the adversity of overweight. Awareness campaign on radio and television can enrich people with adequate knowledge about the possible implications of this. If people became aware then the consumption of unhealthy food will automatically go down. Furthermore, making fitness centers available to the people can be a solution. Apart from big cities where fitness centers are available at almost every corner of the street but in small towns then number of fitness centers is comparatively hard to find. The government needs to take the initiative to build gyms in every high streets.
To sum up, overnight related disease is one of our modern day problems that need immediate attention and we have no one but us to blame for this. Public awareness along with adequate facilities may help to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, then, while, apart from, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59736945957 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6086814402 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6315789474 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125646441253 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398395831101 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287108538895 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744781336673 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188171621553 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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