In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, some countries are experiencing a problem where people are becoming heavier and also less fit and healthy. I think that the causes of this are due to unhealthy lifestyle, diet or lack of exercise. Besides, there are many possible solutions to solve these problems.
First of all, the causes of gain weight are diet and lack of exercise. If a person eats more calories than they use and they do not exercise enough, they will get increased in weight. For example, in the modern world, most people work in offices and they work all day in the same place as their computer. Then they come home late from work, they will buy something to eat like fast food that contains lots of calories because they do not have time to prepare a meal and even have no time to exercise.
Another cause is that unhealthy lifestyle. People are getting lazier but they eat more and more food. Especially, many people prefer fast food that is high in calories such as pizza, burgers, sugary drinks, candies or chocolate... Perhaps because it tastes better. That is why more and more people gain weight and diabetes
On the other hand, I think the best solution to lose weight is to get people to exercise more and have a healthy lifestyle. For instance, people can work out at least 30 minutes per day such as walking, running, playing sports with their friends or colleagues or go to the gym and have a personal trainer who guides you a healthy diet. Besides, when you come home from work, you can exercise by cleaning the house, playing with your children or bring the dog for a walk. Another solution is getting fewer calories, balance their diet. For example, eating more vegetable fruits, eating less meat and drink plenty of water throughout the day or spend your time to prepare healthy meals for your family.
In conclusion, we need to have a healthy lifestyle. People should exercise more often and eat fewer calories to declining levels of weight.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69590643275 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33040018489 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6310533599 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147418951622 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510104276089 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347667914392 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925785881783 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380804155908 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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