In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?
Different countries has different retirement age. Perhaps a reflection of economics, population pressures or simply value systems. Indeed, retirement at 55,60 can probably be as easily justified.I am also agree that ,retirement should given in 55 age because It is better for both the worker and the employer and I shall discuss my points in coming paragraph.
Chronological age is not always a true indicator of ability. While some 60 year olds may not perform as well as they did in their past, many workers at this age do just as well or better than they used to. People's suitability for a position should be a reflection of their performance in the job, rather than the number of wrinkles or grey hairs they have. After the age 60, people can feel many health problems such as back pain. Employee who doing job in felid area, cannot perform well or better than they did in past. Moreover, youth bring extra energy and new innovative ideas to turn jobs more productive and less costly.
Nowadays population increase day by day , the more young people suffer form not getting jobs after graduation. young people suffer low income by many years, So I think young people should get a chance. Secondly things is old people wants larger amount of money. Older people have lot of experience they can guide their junior but in they can't do physical work. One example such as in steel, chemical industries they wants more young people who are physical fit. older people do more office work because they have experience lot and very useful for company. Some companies gives very good amount of pension after retirement that person can enjoy their life with family member.
In conclusion, workers who can still demonstrate their capacity to carry out their work but they can do better or well condition as they did in past, So I think people enjoy their retirement age and get a chance to young people because in over population world more and more people suffer form unemployment.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280323450135 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.123989218329 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105121293801 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.078167115903 0.0501214627716 156% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0592991913747 0.0437548338989 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123989218329 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.010781671159 0.0403226058552 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.46377946142 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010781671159 0.0326793684256 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00269541778976 0.00163938923432 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.0431266846361 0.0861772015684 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0323450134771 0.021408717616 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00808625336927 0.011925033212 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1985.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8211143695 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328445747801 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193548387097 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143695014663 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0967741935484 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46377946142 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 59.9875109063 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0588235294 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7527664099 49.517814964 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.764705882 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.99599198397 350% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.4136622391 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.58762886598 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310635921655 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0757319113878 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0612319904037 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450934378988 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195563405469 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102927208917 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562643424345 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294444334803 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0882103042632 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205842383233 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361002590251 0.058150111329 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.