In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, governments in many nations motivate and support the relocation of businesses and industries to non- metropolitan areas in the country. There are pros and cons to this recent development. This essay examines whether the benefits over-rides its drawbacks.
There are many benefits of industries and businesses establishing their base outside metropolitan areas and this includes a reduction in environmental pollution and congestion in cities. With industries building their bases outside cities, toxic pollutions in the cities will be drastically reduced, especially from its industrial machineries and this will help the government achieve its environmental sustainability goals.
Also, the over-crowding of cities caused by business workers would be cut-down, when they relocate closer to their place of work.
However, a major drawback to industries moving out of cities is the burden of huge travel expenses for low-pay workers and unemployment increase. Poor workers will find it difficult to finance their travel, commuting from their homes in the city to their place of work. Invariably, this will place them under huge stress to cater for their family needs having less money. Further more, this might cause some workers to resign because of the financial implications of transportation, thus resulting to unemployment and a negative impact on the societal economy.
In my opinion, i believe the benefits exceeds in importance compared to it disadvantages. It is better for industries and businesses to move to less populated areas as this would help in reducing pollution and over-crowding in the cities. For instance, the 2019 Nigerian Environmentalist Association Report, argue that Industries contribute to 85% of environmental pollution in the cities by their emission of poisonous gases.
In essence, a good way to curb this issue, is for the government to support and encourage industries to build their base outside metropolitan areas.
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also, but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62080536913 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17982193062 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5846524149 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241129507366 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879683690741 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058509300757 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133778289775 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450518479024 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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