In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, in this complicated world, the number of people who decided to live alone have been increased sharply. Hence, there are numerous of significant debates among social researchers about prominent reasons of this phenomenon and beneficial and detrimental impacts of that in all societies.
Majority of social experts classified the main reasons of this tendency of people`s lifestyle in several distinct categories. As they have mentioned, the first and most important reason of this event is decreasing people`s tolerance in facing with other ideas such as parent`s recommendations or spouse`s demands. Actually, by this approach people eliminate some fundamental pressure from their mind. Second reason of this attitude is decreasing the number of marriage in most countries because of declining financial vigor or lack of sympathy between men and women. Recent published reports in U.S. illustrated that the number of marriage in this country have been diminished more than 20% in last 5 years.
On the other aspect, this type of life has some positive and negative consequences undoubtedly. Psychologists argue that when people live alone they can`t support all of their essential requirements individually. In their opinion, without appropriate comrade some mental issues are unavoidable especially for elder people. Similarly, some social experts claim that in singleness lifestyle the number of family conflicts will decrease definitely. Furthermore, some economic experts think that the cost of life is cheaper in this type of life in comparison with a crowded family.
In conclusion, in contemporary century concurrent by lots of technological developments the number of single people have been rose slightly. In my point of view, although pursuing this pattern causes to creating several mental problems for people, the type of life is a private decision for people. I think some people with particular behavior can`t manage collective life and being single is more profitable for them.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66013071895 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06199907785 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2933802817 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228171781536 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802912048281 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469994322299 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1361303388 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270030706739 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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