In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, numerous people prefer to stay alone all by themselves instead of living with family than in the past. Some people believe the phenomenon is a drawback trend. In my opinion, I believe that this is a positive development.
On the one hand, people will be faced with the rising cost. It is because people have to pay all consumption cost by themselves without other people’s supports. For example, my friend decided to live alone so she has to pay all her renting fees, consumption costs and various kinds of fees to live in Ho Chi Minh City. Moreover, living alone increase the risk of health mental problem for young people. Because adult has to solve many problems in daily life, such as: relationship with college, promotion path, earning money. Therefore, they need some prestigious people to share feeling and give some advices. As I mentioned above, my friend lived by herself alone in the not-so-distant-past. When she had some problems, she had no one to help her know the right things to do. So she realized that having a roommate will make her happier and decrease the monthly living cost.
On the other hand, staying alone can bring a lot of benefits for people as they can enjoy their lives without other reference. It is because young people can have an initiative in the daily life without taking into account roommate. In the US, young people constantly stay alone to reduce parent’s control. Furthermore, from an economic perspective, staying alone creates the greater demand for housing. Because adult needs hiring an apartment or buying a house when they move out from home. Therefore, the real estate investors need to construct more houses to meet the need. Take Shanghai as an example, so many people moved to the city finding an occupation. So to satisfy the demand, many buildings were built in the city.
In conclusion, in my view, there are more positive elements than negative, as there are clear benefits to individual who live alone. However, living with friends or families helps people save living cost and have someone to enjoy the life with.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90985915493 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59144825278 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1073727277 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2272727273 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251566269369 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754351723292 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435574668271 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172195108153 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04806883685 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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