In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the modern world, the trend of being alone at the age of marriage is increasing. While this trend can be positive to some extent, I would argue that it is more negative.
The development of living alone can be seen as positive. First of all, people are more freedom in life than others. An adult, for example, will have the independence in finance and have fewer burdens when paying the daily cost. Hence, people who like the independent life have more time to take care of themselves and it can reduce health problems related to worry. Secondly, this trend can help to decrease the urgent problem is overpopulation as some couples want to give birth to triplets or more. Therefore, some causes from the growth of population such as unemployment, polluted air, and demand for housing... will be eliminated.
This style, however, can be a negative development in some cases. Most of the people feel lonely when lacking of conversations, sharing from members in family or people who stay with them. A serious consequence is appreciable acceleration to neuropathology like depression, autism... Next, the individuals are becoming to be remote from social because they are accustomed to living without the presence of others. This is the reason why people will meet the difficulty when making a date or making acquaintance.
In conclusion, while the development of choosing living alone has several positive impacts, I believe the drawbacks of this tendency are much greater.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...sion, while the development of choosing living alone has several positive impacts, I b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08196721311 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87565937194 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1261852311 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263939242504 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085100428624 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713813147031 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166157001923 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354971256662 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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