In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, University, or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries, there are many adults are living with their parents after college or university graduation or when they are working. I opine this gives both advantages and disavantages and this essay will give my opinion
In term of the benifits, one of the most helpful advantages is that they are taken care of by their parents. Some people choose to live with their parents to have a care, they want to have a hearty meal prepared after a tiring day, they want to see a clean house every day that they do not need to do anything. Simply because there are parents at home to take care of everything. As a case of this point, Khanh Vy- a young inspiration once revealed that she invited her parents from Nghe An to Hanoi to stay with her because she wanted someone to cook and clean the house for her.
In cons, if people live with parents, they will lack of the private space. If people live with their founts, they will have no private space, no personal decisions, all your thoughts and intentions must be accepted by their parents. Above all, they must also limit the partying at home. To illustrate the point,
my sister always nags about her parents coming to live with her, she says that she does not have a private space with her friends and even her boyfriend because her parents are at home. She did not like the fact that she bought a pan and had to ask her mother's opinion.
In conclusion, I think adults live with their parents gives both advantage and disavantge, it helps people have a care but it make them lack of their private spaces and their decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47058823529 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2347584176 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9727489945 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24557308019 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105033627105 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103439067669 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16205950111 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949349305577 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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